this is the song we are choreographing to, it is a combination of english and bollywood put together. This is a fast song with a variety of different beat. The one thing i dislike about this song is that there should have been more bollywood lyrics or equal amount of lyrics as english so the song would have been more of bollywood, as well as english instead of more of english and a little bit of bollywood, other than that this song is easy to dance to as you can have a lot of moves to dance with this tune.
This song is good, you have gave a good description what the song is about. ' this is a fast song with a variety of different beats'- this is a good description.
The thing that could've been improved is you structure of writing. This paragraph here 'The one thing i dislike about this song is that there should have been more bollywood lyrics or equal amount of lyrics as english so the song would have been more of bollywood, as well as english instead of more of english and a little bit of bollywood'. This paragraph is all over the place, it doesn't make much sense. You should re-write this again. Apart from that, it is good.
this is the song we are choreographing to, it is a combination of english and bollywood put together. This is a fast song with a variety of different beat. The one thing i dislike about this song is that there should have been more bollywood lyrics or equal amount of lyrics as english so the song would have been more of bollywood, as well as english instead of more of english and a little bit of bollywood, other than that this song is easy to dance to as you can have a lot of moves to dance with this tune.
ReplyDeleteThis song is good, you have gave a good description what the song is about. ' this is a fast song with a variety of different beats'- this is a good description.
ReplyDeleteThe thing that could've been improved is you structure of writing. This paragraph here 'The one thing i dislike about this song is that there should have been more bollywood lyrics or equal amount of lyrics as english so the song would have been more of bollywood, as well as english instead of more of english and a little bit of bollywood'. This paragraph is all over the place, it doesn't make much sense. You should re-write this again. Apart from that, it is good.
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by a blog administrator.
ReplyDeletethat guy looks like minyzul
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeletemhinazul i should take back your comment and work on it, thank you very much for trying to help me out . k bye now :)
ReplyDelete